In many private editing jobs, I have to remind clients that more specific language exists, and it’s okay to use new and different descriptors in each paragraph. Manuscript after manuscript, clients repeated the same non-committal, tired, and useless adjectives with the fervor of novice writers; faithfully and often.
A theatrical but accurate re-telling of certain events of a certain day.
Critical Review: (each item on a 10-point scale)Voice and theme consistent: 9I enjoyed the raw feel of the narrative voice. It remained firm and stubborn like the MC and provided the tone for the reader’s expectations from the characters.Fulfilment of promises: 7While the MCs end arc felt correct, it lacked the gritty depth of detail […]
In Today’s Post you will find the true story of how I almost lost an entire year of progress; WIP and posting plans; and what fans are asking about how I manage to write a whole book.
In Today’s Post you will find the true story of how I almost lost an entire year of progress; WIP and posting plans; and what fans are asking about how I manage to write a whole book.
Ubriel Bryne Books 